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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-06-28 06:27 AM


Midsummer eve it is in our castle of love and delight.
Sitting at the top table, we pair  King and Queen, sit amused and contented by our subjects, as a minstrel plays sweet mandolin in the gallery.

Gently i lean and whisper words of love in your ear.
Taking your elegant hand in mine,we stroll into the walled garden, slowly.

Full moon beams down silver light onto the empty echoing garden, my heart is full.
Your crimson silk dress and smooth milky white skin, strike deep within me.

Braking a newly opened white rose, i present it to you,taking it,you smell it's subtle fragrance, twirl it gently in your fingers,without taking your eyes off me, i am so in love with thee.

Bidding you come and sit by me, on a seat under a canopy of rambling roses, gently i kiss your sweet red lips.
Falling to the turf i undress your trembling, heaving body,kiss every inch of you, your dear ripe breasts, your sweet scented abdomen.

Making love i call your sweet name around the echoing, silver streamed, sweet scented garden of desire,my Queen,my heart,my beautiful woman.

Later laying lovingly in each others arms, i beckon the minstrel.
Playing sweet mandolin and singing softly, he sooths our passionate hearts, playing music into the heavens so far.

Gazing into the dark pools of your eyes, my lips gently touch yours.
Looking into them again, a deep bright light is within them, so bright... like that of an exploding star...

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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1 posted 2003-06-28 06:55 AM


Passionate prose...it warmed my heart and several other parts of me...like for example my ears. *grin
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-06-28 11:33 AM


mmmmm....nice
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-06-29 08:00 PM


With every word ,I can feel your breath all over me touching me as i read this one, I  shall be thy Vermilion Love Queen, My Amber Love King, and in our hearts Castle our love will forever reign........You are my Shakespeare!

Love Your Vermilion QueenXXXX

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