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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England 
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I don’t know who I’m writing to If these are even words If I speak the same language Because it doesn’t seem like it at all I talk to myself I used to understand Now I can’t even read my own writing I don’t even know if this is my own hand Because it sure never felt like this before There’s not much left to say If I could say anything at all There’s not much I can do There’re only so many hours in one day And maybe for a moment I believed that I was wrong But even if that is true There’s nothing gonna stop me now I’m hurting so bad Can’t you see it in my eyes Oh you’re so blind Maybe you just don’t want to cry Because it’s all your fault But nothing I can say will change it now I’m broken Once even twice you looked my way Then you turned back Either you didn’t notice Or it’s just a fact That you really don’t care at all And I’m the one that’s gotta deal with it all I bet you it’s true With things as bad as this It’s never you Oh mr.perfect Look he won another prize Hey you Look yeah I’m wearing a disguise I don’t want anybody to know me anymore I don’t wanna turn up Then have to walk back out the door Just because of you I’m hurting so bad Can’t you see it in my eyes Oh you’re so blind Maybe you just don’t want to cry Because it’s all your fault But nothing I can say will change it now I’m broken. I just want something,One thing,Can’t you let me have someone,Anyone,Just for me,And this is what I seem to be,To everybody,Your last resort |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Rosie - I know this all too well God do I know this . . . and you have yourself a song here truly . . . put it to some chords quick! awesome writing and yes by your hand . . . xxoo |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
What powerful emotion, what a fabulous song this could be. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I'm with you in understanding this all too well |
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rm711 Member
since 2002-11-30
Posts 131Wiltshire, England |
thankyou all so much for reading & replying id love it to be a song..that seems to be the way all my poems are going now, which is good, im learning music, so...watch this space!! hehe I just want something,One thing,Can’t you let me have someone,Anyone,Just for me,And this is what I seem to be,To everybody,Your last resort |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yeah I've been broken a few times...James |
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