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Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

0 posted 2003-06-28 05:26 AM

take the feelings you had
the love that showered
the love that made you safe
you're always okay
don't think it's ever
going to leave
there will always be this,
this unforgotten
this unchangeable
this rearangeable
situation

now it's time to
redirect
reflect
hesitate only to continue
what you once felt
the drive, the passion
only now
for a different reason
don't fear it
embrace the power
the after affects of love
the positive remembering
don't go back
just reminisce
it's okay
just never forget

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-28-2003 05:56 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

1 posted 2003-06-28 05:58 AM

this unforgotten
this unchangeable
this rearangeable
situation

God this sounds familiar . . .
wish it didnt for the both of us
amazing writing Talia
xxoo

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

2 posted 2003-06-28 06:36 AM

great writing, a complex mind of emotions you are Talia.

Thanks for the words.

Goldenrose.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-06-28 07:04 AM

I like the 'never forget' philosophy of this.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-28 11:31 AM

like it~

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2003-06-28 11:35 AM

"the after affects of love
the positive remembering"...beautiful.
I dig your new picture, too, by the way. ;-)

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

6 posted 2003-06-28 11:37 AM

"don't fear it
embrace the power
the after affects of love
the positive remembering
don't go back
just reminisce
it's okay
just never forget"

sounds familiar to me too ... i like the ending...strong
i won't forget

thanks for sharing this, i'm glad i read it

*kelly*

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

7 posted 2003-06-28 11:09 PM

Thank you all, I really liked this (for my own work that is) hehe. Thanks Kahlil. The new pic is waaaaay better, I thought the old one made me look frumpy...and yes goldenrose, my poems are this jumbled mess of words(and emotions)..until you get to the end,then at that point it all makes sense, well at least I hope it does..thanks again everyone for commenting,it still means a lot

~Talia

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