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valentino (a lil duet w/ edder) |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA 
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Silent Whispers Silver screen Dreams Serenading On desert winds Hold me... In seductive Capture kiss me.. Into sweet Surrender Love me As I shall Love you Ride... To my rescue My Valentino... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-28-2003 05:06 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God this is stunning! Amazing writing you guys from two beautiful people *smiling* This is lovely . . . xxoo |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
give credit to the Lady....i only threw in a word or two. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A few lines can carry a great deal of impact... very good, kudos to the both of you! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely ladies! Soooo romantic. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 thanks guys and Edder thanks again for putting up with my ramble earlier and throwing in a word or two lol..*pokes Sue just because*  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (06-28-2003 12:10 PM).] |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
twas my pleasure Kris...you can keep me up any ole night. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hehehe lol @ Kris . . . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very NICE. Conveys the energy of the romantic torrent. I could truly envision this as an old black and white flickering, subtitled. Makes me wanna bat my eyelashes. Yummy stuff, guys. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
yummy stuff, huh? why is it that made me think about chocolate? |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*drools* chocolate uhhhh having a moment here..valentino and chocolate *rated g*If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...James |
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