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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2003-06-28 03:34 AM



Falling hearts,
broken Promises
why could'ent
i be the one to
see this starting.

blinded by my pure
true love for you.
belived all the words
you said,through
and through.

i remeber the walks we
had on the moon lit beach.
ive remeber us splashing
in the pool,kicking up
our feet.

how the sun shown on
your pale complexion
who would of known
you taught me a lesson.

things don't last forever
don't trust so dearingly
this is what you shown
this is what you are
telling me.

wanted you back
in my arms ever so
much,wanted your tender
lips up against mine.
longing for your touch.


gentel breezes as it
glids along my silky
brown hair. sweet ocean
water fills the night air.

looking back on our
foot prints in the
sand,trying to understand
why i wanted you back,
why i wanted you to be
my main man.

all u caused is sorrow and
hurt inside my heart. all
the damaged you done,it made
me fall apart. now i stand strong
and remeber the lesson learnt.

not to run away from love,
not to be afraid of getting
burnt. that is the thing ill
keep in mind,when im unsure.

that is the thing ill always
remeber just that and nothing
more.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-06-28 03:39 AM


"all u caused is sorrow and
hurt inside my heart. all
the damaged you done,it made
me fall apart. now i stand strong
and remeber the lesson learnt."

YES...Reflection, and then new direction!

Another keeper Foxy

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
2 posted 2003-06-28 03:44 AM


Thanks,still hard getting that first love out of your life. when he keeps trying to slink his way back in.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-06-28 03:54 AM


i don't belive anyone forgets there first love,,

hell i still remember mine when i'm having a senior moment,,,   lol

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2003-06-28 04:11 AM


hehe my mom has those mouments she is going throught *The Change* right now. Hot dog for me. never a dull moument LoL

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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