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B3jamboree
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since 2003-06-26
Posts 33
Michigan

0 posted 2003-06-28 03:01 AM


Her friday nights
Are his friday nights
Thoes friday nights used to be mine
So what do I do now
On my friday nights?
Let's just say
I don't make love in the pines

Her friday nights
Are his friday nights
So what do I do with my time
So what do I do now
On these friday nights?
I simply
Commit several heinous crimes

Oh [edited by moderator] this poem
Really [edited by moderator] it though
I just can't write another verse
I'v written so many
And this friday night
I'm trying
To shake memories foul curse

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-29-2003 01:21 PM).]

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CaseyLeigh
Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48

1 posted 2003-06-28 03:03 AM


yes, we've all been here before, in some shape or form...
timothysangel1973
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since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725
Never close enough
2 posted 2003-06-28 04:09 AM


Man...I've had the Friday night blues a million times atleast...but, it gets better...
Look at it this way...it isn't Friday night anymore.  See there, you made it!

Your poem was very much enjoyed!

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