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Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

0 posted 2003-06-28 02:13 AM

Heartfelt words
uneasily spoken
did not assure
our relationship

Should I move on
to independence
unspoken words
too much to bear

Heavy tip-toe
played the game
instead of crumbling
I let go

Some love has ties
and expectations
that silence the union
into the ground

Some love just sails
the ocean blue
and rides the waves
rides out the tides

Faces the wind
and soars the skies
filled with spirit
and the truth

I face the changes
I am scared
but I have hope
and keep my faith

Maybe just a soft goodbye
but I’ll still love
and won’t deny
Our truth

[This message has been edited by Kahlil (06-28-2003 10:55 AM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-28 02:15 AM

very nice write n read,,,,

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2003-06-28 02:36 AM

very good indeed

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-06-28 02:37 AM

thank you, Q...

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2003-06-28 02:44 AM

thank you foxyoasis...hain't posted in awhile, so I'm gun shy, ya know? :-) This is a true happening for me though, so it isn't easy...

Black Swan
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

5 posted 2003-06-28 11:13 PM

yeah the love that sails the ocean and faces the wind and makes it though...that sounds good to me, haven't found it yet,keep sailing that ocean kahlil..let the wind guide you to where you are meant to be
~Talia

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-06-29 01:23 PM

This...a very quiet,
intense read...

mixed with a whole lot of truth.

A very good poem.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

7 posted 2003-06-29 01:36 PM

thank you Sunshine, you've nailed it, my feelings are intense, but quietly is the way to deal with this...not too much more I can do. Thanks

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

8 posted 2003-06-30 06:19 AM

"I face the changes
I am scared
but I have hope
and keep my faith

Maybe just a soft goodbye
but I’ll still love
and won’t deny
Our truth"

The bare truth of also my feelings u wrote down with a peacefull sound in it.
Thanks for sharing this

*kelly*

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-06-30 09:07 AM

Fantastic write full of emotion full of hurt

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2003-06-30 09:10 AM

I know exactly what you are writing about and couldn't have put better...

Thanks...

regards
sudhir

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

11 posted 2003-06-30 09:12 AM

Very well written piece..
Hope the sadness doesn't stay too long..
~Soft smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-07-01 02:29 PM

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-07-01 02:34 PM

You also speak the truth for many others...

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

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