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Luck's Run Out
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Luck's Run Out |
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TasteOfOctober Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 94 |
Believe as not, this is a different writing style than I'm used to using and its one of the most recent things ive written and its not as long as it looks. so here you go. Luck's Run Out Lucky to see Lucky to stand Lucky to have met you Lucky to be a man Lucky to have lived Lucky to have died Lucky to come back Lucky to survive Lucky to be here Lucky to be free Lucky to Love you Lucky to be Luck's finally gone Luck's finally run out I won't step down But up to my final bout Luck looked me in the eye And we grapple and clash Then luck tucked tail and ran Because I kicked it's ass Its not by luck that I live I fight and I strive It was by my own strength That I now survive I set my will And make two strong fists And I broke the chains Bound 'round my wrists Turn round while you can My will is set to fight And I will not walk off Into that eternal night You've done the same Broke yoru chains So let us rage together Let us remain Lucky to see? Lucky to stand? It was your will boy That made you a man Lucky to live? Open yoru eyes Because you fought for the right To survive Lucky to be here? Luck is gone And you will fight Or you will be done Thre is no luck friend So set yoru will strong Follow yoru heart You won't go wrong I fight my battles You fight yoru fights It wasn't lucky we met Its what we knew was right. Lucky to see And our eyes meet Luck's run out Now on yoru feet You killed me I killed you Brothers we were Until the battle was through So keep fighting Lucky stars Have faded to fate I'll take my battle right to heaven's gate Live now my friend It's yoru own, Fight Follow yoru heart, you know its right, keep fighting even into that eternal night this is NOT yoru final bout we were soldiers And lucks run out. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
WOW! I loved it!  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very cool poem! Reads like a Metallica song almost...  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very good write about luck,,,, A voice of honesty |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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