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Drexler_McStyles
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since 2002-11-18
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0 posted 2003-06-28 12:20 PM



we look to the videography
for approval
the monitor lies
but it tells us
what we need
to know
cushions our
tender embrace
our shuffled
moments of passion
I prefer
lovers lane

in the back alley
the raw flesh
the unbridled passion
the skirts
that have no hard time
gathering

when I kiss
your mouth...
the wonderland of fortune....
the hiatus that I take
from the rest of the world....
the places that we frequent
when those who lie
lie lazy
and allow us to drift....

I love you
for the freedom you allow
for the words that you speak
into my ear
like a dream
like a prayer
if there is any justice
my love
then this tempered affair
will remain undisturbed
or undetained
and the lawmakers
will take steps to the left
and we
will be there
waiting for the sun
waiting on the line
that will take us straight through
to the eternal bliss
as languidly
as we would like
to dare

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-06-28 12:22 PM



timothysangel1973
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2 posted 2003-06-28 12:23 PM


Wonderful writing!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-06-28 12:24 PM


and we
will be there
waiting for the sun
waiting on the line
that will take us straight through
to the eternal bliss
as languidly
as we would like
to dare

the ending was a happy one...very lovely read...stunning mobile of caring love, to sooth the heart and warm the soul...thank you for sharing.

CaseyLeigh
Junior Member
since 2003-05-15
Posts 48

4 posted 2003-06-28 03:10 AM


"for the freedom you allow
for the words that you speak"

some people do set us free...

Drexler_McStyles
Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195
Venice, Ca
5 posted 2003-06-28 03:32 AM


its not usually relayed from those who you need the words to be spoke from...but who's keeping track in this flambouyant orgy of life?....

slobamatros

PS: what color were your panties?

Casandra
or
**** It!

[This message has been edited by Drexler_McStyles (06-28-2003 03:33 AM).]

CaseyLeigh
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since 2003-05-15
Posts 48

6 posted 2003-06-28 10:09 AM


don't even start....
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