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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-27 11:48 PM



Privilege Revoked

I reserved
a place
for you
special space
you cancelled
now it’s gone
withdrawn
and out
of reach

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
icebox
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383
in the shadows
1 posted 2003-06-28 12:03 PM


Stay angry.  It is more healthy than depression.

Much strength in this sad poem.

timothysangel1973
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Senior Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725
Never close enough
2 posted 2003-06-28 12:10 PM


I can relate Lady!

Wonderful write, much enjoyed!


Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-06-28 12:13 PM


good thing came back or would have missed this
great write as always and yeah i'm with ice..angers more fun anyway

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

4 posted 2003-06-28 12:16 PM


good write...let the emotions flow...your poems are exceptionally brilliant...and if you don't mind...would love to read more.  

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-06-28 12:18 PM


I hope this isn't about me

it would break my heart

I am coming down one day soon, I sware!

SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
6 posted 2003-06-28 12:20 PM


yeppers, one I can relate to very well nicely said...
Edder
Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671

7 posted 2003-06-28 12:21 PM


his loss i'd say...you deserve so much more
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