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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-27 09:16 PM


Universal, this theme of life, effaced by none
Never to be common placed, moving men by-gone
For their savored autumn notes, ring out a new
By a great magician’s hand, if the source be true
All hopes, fears, and love, achieves beyond uncertainty
Reflecting themes in human life, a skillful morning breeze
We turn a key and open wide our soul-filled loving arms
Windward thoughts deep within, blooms prophetic hearts
Formed eccentric, stillness lives, pure of any sound
By banners flown of dawn’s sweet flute, infinity profound
The ultimate communiqué, prodigious sea’s celestial breathe
Excels the crowns of inspiration, where homes forever set.


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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-27 09:24 PM


The ultimate communiqué, prodigious sea’s celestial breathe


very impressive lines,, loved the write and read....

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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2 posted 2003-06-27 09:37 PM


My goodness,  but I should pay far more
attention to these writings,  certainly
a stellar piece.  Thank you..many very
nice lines within.

timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-06-27 09:42 PM


So deep, and full of thought!
I really liked this one Lee!

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