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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-27 09:02 PM


Beautiful mirage, compassion, we all stir with
Our comforter perplexed with impressions
Shall we hear its voice, waning courage
For our attention, salvation speaks apertures of praise
Be our possessions, come what may
Bubbling forth internal digestions
Matchless influence, animating our thoughts
Perhaps our nuptial feast with camaraderie flowing forth
We are, after all, out of humanity’s speech
Conveying our joys, sorrows, to others we feed.
Have you seen the bird with a crippled wing?
Can we give it some cordial endearing ease
Friendship, love, beyond ourselves
Captured thoughts, on the wings of a dove
Treasured unto our poorly lives….
And our beautiful delusions, which with age
Shall cease to be an impartial plain
More so, a space that perhaps will gaze
or....
Reside…by our own transitions multiplied
By what we reflect and how we abide……..

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-27 09:11 PM


a beautiful write,,

enjoyed the read...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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2 posted 2003-06-28 11:18 PM


"Have you seen the bird with a crippled wing?
Can we give it some cordial endearing ease
Friendship, love, beyond ourselves
Captured thoughts, on the wings of a dove
Treasured unto our poorly lives…."

A beautiful write, I must've missed it along the way. I enjoyed this a lot...

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