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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
And when time came And then love was there For every spring that left Us alone And when love was here To say Let along the way Each leave of summer breeze Turns Into dried And when an ocean meets the shore Touches for every first time And when love would realise the time And when I am here to see time Time would stay And when every song I write I write every word Meaning each word And when time showed it's way And when..... And when you loved me!!!!! And when you...... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...and when you... Lovely Vandana...just lovely. ~Hugs~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
vandana...Your words are o full of heart and endless yearning. This is an exquisite poem of love. ***Ivy Rose |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Exquisite! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...remembering is a fine thing |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I like this vandana. The open end indicates endless possibility of remembering. Like you've got a long list to enjoy... enjoyed.  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, this is a beauiful love poem..... and you know that I love it.  Hugs to you, my friend  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Vandana, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always write very touching poetry that makes the heart beat! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts from your heart...James |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I'd like to finish it for you, but some things are left best as they are, and you have shown it clearly. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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