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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-27 06:13 PM


Love Accepted

Love, and all
the beautiful blessings
it has to offer is waiting
to find it's rightful place.

Though at times we have
been rejected in precious
moments all will be accepted
into the arms of love's embrace.

JamesLee
June27
2003
I wrote this after
rereading my poem
called "Love Rejected".



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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-06-27 06:15 PM


very nice write of poetry,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


quatro
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2 posted 2003-06-30 01:05 AM


"Love, and all
the beautiful blessings
it has to offer is waiting
to find it's rightful place."

What can I say?  This was wonderfully said.  I'm glad that you reread your poem or you would not have come up with this.  Great job!

quatro

SEA
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3 posted 2003-06-30 01:09 AM


"Love, and all
the beautiful blessings
it has to offer is waiting
to find it's rightful place."

and I'm sure your heart will be more than ready for it

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-06-30 01:51 AM


Thank you QJQ, quatro and Sea for the beautiful responses...James
timothysangel1973
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5 posted 2003-06-30 04:34 AM


Well now, better to be accepted than rejected anyday James...

A Wonderful write!

AniKay83
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6 posted 2003-06-30 05:06 AM




Yeah, James, that's what I like to hear.

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VIVA
LA FUNK!!!

Margherita
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7 posted 2003-06-30 08:33 AM


Perfect and wise balance to "love rejected". Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

janeree
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8 posted 2003-06-30 08:54 AM


I enjoyed you poem bery much.


Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-06-30 09:29 AM


BEAUTIFUL!!
~Smiles & Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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