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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-27 04:53 PM


What would it take
to get you
to notice..
This is my name?

I memorize your patterns,
I breathe you in as
you walk by.
I can't remember a time
when I was so infatuated with
a man.

What would it take
to get you to
understand, that I feel
as though my hand
belongs
in a place between your fingers..?

A lying smile tells me
that impossiblities can be
conquered..

I breathe you in
as you walk by..


© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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1 posted 2003-06-27 04:55 PM


This reminds me of my trip to the mall...just kidding...very sensual...James
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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2 posted 2003-06-27 04:58 PM


absolutly terrific,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-06-27 05:32 PM


beautiful feeling isn't it...love fills the air, and the aura around you becomes one of brilliance.  
Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2003-06-27 06:00 PM


Very beautiful ..... yes impossibilities can be conquered.
Love, Margherita

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