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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-28 04:14 PM


A Kiss Amiss

Taking my last look at the woman I'll greatly miss.
She tells me to hurt me that she has found another.
Then she tells me to give her my last kiss, a kiss
amiss for these our last moments together.
During the kiss my mind takes me to the pleasure of
our first kiss, a kiss given under a graceful palm
tree,  lying on the silky beaches of Waikiki.
Rapidly my mind flashes traces of precious kisses
we shared as two,  and then suddenly I am standing
all alone, sans you.
Later that night in my dreams, I dream of all the
kisses inbetween.
Perhaps, too many to count, but each a kiss I
wouldn't want to live without.

JamesLee
June28
2003
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Margherita
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1 posted 2003-06-28 04:19 PM


Very lovely James .... each kiss a moment to treasure, even if the last one may hurt.
Enjoyed your kissy memories.
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2003-06-28 05:19 PM


...sad
Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-06-28 05:58 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Yes, each kiss means something very special, so hold the memories dear even when the afterglow can make you hot under the collar! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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4 posted 2003-06-28 06:02 PM


Yep, James...those kisses are really something to remember and hold close in our hearts and minds, aren't they?  

Hugs  
Ethel

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