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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-06-27 03:03 PM




Softly touch my heart
slowly undress me
with your eyes
gently with a torrid
and sultry way
and I will not ever
forsake you
it is only you that
I desire
when I open my eyes
each breaking day




A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-27-2003 04:38 PM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-06-27 04:55 PM


Wonderful work, beautiful.
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2003-06-27 05:06 PM


Nice writing...looks like you have it bad for her...James
LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-06-27 05:31 PM


beautiful write, good luck, many good wishes for happiness sent along
Margherita
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4 posted 2003-06-27 05:57 PM


Your breaking day holds love. Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-06-27 08:30 PM


a warm thanks to all who responded,,
i treasure your replies...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


JilGirl
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6 posted 2003-06-27 09:56 PM


A very special love write.
So extra sweet!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-06-27 10:05 PM


"gently with a torrid
and sultry way"

WooHoo, I love it!

Tima C

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