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LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2003-06-27 12:55 PM

Emblem by ownership
Untainted by consciousness.
Dramatizes a mind detaining
Climactic epiphany constitutes
A decisive stage in an imaginative process
Which structures contemplation and feeling
A dual perspective engages

Inter-city commuting with day's fading light
Draws us into a fairylike realm of twilight
Understanding our welcomed companion.
The recognition is spiritual and robustly communing.

Prudence inherits compassionate solace
Mutual affection prepares us for elated renovations
Self-affirmation…greetings, intellectual
Blessing budding in a white tinted golden rose
Progression, intense occurrence, restorative vision
'I wandered,' within the breeze of the creative spirit
While it caresses and visits human tenderness, the core........

Interlacing, theatrical and prosaic.
Pivoting as it does on the 'weekend away'
Having this is in itself permission
Transforming ability to exhilarating joy
The emblem is the blossom, and the bosom of earth
Resonates with more than a romantic sense
An intimate sentinel, through paths unseen before
Themes rapport, redefining elements of old
Embodying a transitional stage in development
Potentiality, the artistic rite of passage.
Metaphoric parallel…Swings open, tier on tier,
Blossoms blown like souls flying on air
To an endless chasm beyond the senses

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-06-27 01:02 PM

Blossoms blown like souls flying on air
To an endless chasm beyond the senses

very nice lines and feelings expressed,,
enjoyed your write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-06-27 01:51 PM

Emblem by ownership
Untainted by consciousness.
Dramatizes a mind detaining
Climactic epiphany constitutes
A decisive stage in an imaginative process
Which structures contemplation and feeling
A dual perspective engages

and it begins... the dual perspective engaged we see it all in different shades or words...

interesting piece... I enjoyed

MysticDreamer
Member

since 2003-04-21

Posts 131

3 posted 2003-06-27 05:45 PM

I like the thoughts and feelings that this Poem brings.

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