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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-06-27 12:43 PM


just a glimpse of you makes
my blood rush like a raging
river

the sounds you hear are not
the roar of the ocean waves

it's my blood rushing through
my veins

the sound of your whisper is
like that of a song bird

fragrances of you intoxifies
my senses

a touch from you sends volts
through my body

I surrender my all to you take
me as your slave of passion

all your loving wishes are my
commands


A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (06-27-2003 04:40 PM).]

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-06-27 12:58 PM


smiles and hugs...that voice of passion speaks and thinks for us all in one....and we have no other road to take, then to follow along helplessly and hopelessly in love.  Good write my friend....warmth and loving heart.
papabear
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 102
Atlanta, GA
2 posted 2003-06-27 01:28 PM


good write...
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2003-06-27 01:29 PM


men like you still exist?
JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
4 posted 2003-06-27 06:12 PM


Most definitely a heartfelt write!
She's a very fortunate gal!
'Hope she's returning that kind of love!



'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

[This message has been edited by JilGirl (06-27-2003 06:13 PM).]

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
5 posted 2003-06-27 08:30 PM


a warm thanks to all who responded,,
i treasure your replies...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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