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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-06-27 11:12 AM


Have you ever felt ....


When the air
electrifies
a coming storm,

time never ends?


Love is a storm

and with each
lightning strike,

the thunder is
endless.

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2003-06-27 01:51 PM


yes
LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-06-27 02:12 PM


oh yeah, would like to share a story, if I may...had the opportunity to visit and island where I stayed just 50 feet from the ocean.  There was a terrible storm up here...and generally the caribbean is a placid azure lake...but this night, it crashed against the sea wall with a raging wonderful sound...and in my cottage all night long, it actually sounded like someone was moving furniture downstairs below me....now that's love!!!!!!  Wow, what a feeling,like touching God...thanks for not only this powerful electrifying write, but also the memory as well.  
Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
3 posted 2003-06-27 02:24 PM


Awesome write.

Jason

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