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LeeJ
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0 posted 2003-06-27 07:50 AM


Bulging authentic with attested furnished summer
Wrapped in a natural cellophane this early evening chauffeur
What strength of character…Aurora Borealis,
Adopts the senses, streaming from finger’s crevasse
Changing light within an infinite embossed theater
Pouring a bon fire of accumulated double vows
Interfacing structure, steering autonomy, explaining the how’s
Overhead someone else views this buttery of flame
Reflecting herbs of incidence like a high powered rifle’s aim
From this, I take belief …direction primed with hunger
Like a giant madron tree, their prayers stretching to high elders
Recognizing the unseen as a level participate with enormous tribal eyes
We drink our weight in design or human conscious shies
Establishing contact with a super human ambassador
Constantly smothered with a percentage of pay we can’t ignore
Affinity smoothes to an elevated tone
While this complexion of the sky spills triumphant drops ingrown
We maintain a minimum wage from seasonal work
Shaping identification of continents sumptuously perked
Forging a religion from grains of the vast
Vividly I remember the growing perfume of replenishment
While in silence this specialized language stirs a soul’s mammoth sense
Strange and exotic this love affair in the heavens
Expanding energy, daydreaming insignia in substance
Floral arrangement of mysterious principles, living cells and atoms
Aurora Borealis.....

Never have I viewed this, but...twould be astounding, I don't think any word could breath description....like love...those emmense all powerful feelings...filling every molecule of life, being a part of earth sea and wind, sky and life....like the Aurora Borealis....we are painted and leave our impression on time.  
By Lee J.




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1 posted 2003-06-27 09:36 AM


ok.....I LOVE your poetry everything I've read so far, is so beautiful!
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2 posted 2003-06-27 09:49 AM


You are intricate and intense...everything I've read from you is so intelligent, so calm and lucid. Even tho I haven't said so, I wanted you to know that I click on your posts every time I see them here. (Thought it was time to let you know that-- )

Enjoying seeing the world through your eyes.

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3 posted 2003-06-27 09:54 AM


Just an amazing piece of work...I am in awe!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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   you haven't been listening.~

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4 posted 2003-06-27 10:33 AM


Simply beautiful !! Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

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5 posted 2003-06-27 12:42 PM


WOW!
Lee, you have described beautifully what I always call my rainbow of dancing lights. It's what I missed most this winter after leaving Alaska. I spent many nights at the window, looking out in awe at these majestic bands of color dancing capriciously in winter's sky. I went outside and watched whenever the temp went above +10F. My first aurora experience was at +20F, then many times after that, I ventured out at subzero temps to catch the full impact of the northern lights.
Thank you for sharing this one.
It is as dynamic as the lights.  

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6 posted 2003-06-27 01:04 PM


terrific and a fabulous wording of poetry,,,,

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      QjQ


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7 posted 2003-06-27 01:35 PM


beautiful write LeeJ
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