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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Complexity is left to flower down to the soul of life Striking between magnum opus, fundamental tests of might Dwelling repeatedly within lofty odds of patience Contented with the great hand of idleness Scanning life, in its natural right to be Much more then itself…elevation of such imagery Penetrates beneath the variations of man Finding no strangers from beginning to end Accepting the sage of ability upon prayer With greater intensity, a day larger then any where Indifferent to the errands at hand, learning Piaget Mode of release and expressions for children Absorbed by nature from which further life comes undone Like the smell of sea reaching far out to reach me Subtle under scents spewing electrical excitement happily Unmatched harbor of wise innocence, violins inner meanings Realm brazen raptures beauty, no inner meanings reveal Velvet night stars dripping into sea, like a suggestion of mysterious language Where a tear will be lush if allowed to descend Life-givers wandering a direct impact to borrowers lend Fathering Genesis, where no sea shall be strapped And white steeds shall touch inland where fish adapt In all assortment of impressions, we know agony not Final visions without meaning, whose light mobiles undefined heights Into a spacious magnitude of Ariadne’s crown transforming night Embrace concrete pillars within the mind’s eye For of this philosopher there is no equal supply |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This: "Velvet night stars dripping into sea, like a suggestion of mysterious language Where a tear will be lush if allowed to descend" and then there is just the symbolic connections you make: "Fathering genesis" to "Ariadne's crown" *shaking my head* delighted and amazed yet again... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Your dance macabre was a delight to read. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Velvet night stars dripping into sea, like a suggestion of mysterious language i enjoyed these lines, they brought a complete vision to my mind,,, very good write... A voice of honesty |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
A pleasure to read... well done |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice write, enjoyed the imagery |
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