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David Carrson
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since 2003-06-23
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Carrickfergus N. Ireland

0 posted 2003-06-27 06:00 AM


Life

To me life is a river
Which each one of us must cross
It's rushing icy waters
A mass of heave and toss.
From sleepy little eddys
To torrents full of pace
Like the problems we encounter
And do our best to face.
Now the only things that help us
Reach the other side
Are the stepping stones and islets
Scattered far and wide.
Some we know are solid
Sturdy strong and high,
Their tops well out of danger
Safe and sure and dry.
But others aren't so helpful
They're slimy wet and green,
Waiting to upend us
Into dangers yet unseen.
So we jump from one to other
And at times we're sure to slip
For all of us have troubles
And we're bound to take a dip.
But if we're really lucky
And we reach that far off shore
Where all our pains and worries
Will trouble us no more,
Then look back across the river
When the sun of life has set
And if we've been really lucky
Then we didn't get too wet.


© Copyright 2003 David C Carson - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-06-27 07:36 AM


I'm smiling, warm heart and tender thoughts...this poem was so true, with harmony and appreciation for life...understanding the stumbling blocks places in our way can usually be the great foundation of our next day...
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-06-27 02:00 PM


awesome ending!
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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3 posted 2003-06-28 12:41 PM


terrific write,,,
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