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0 posted 2003-06-27 12:09 PM



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~~o~~
Sometimes there is love
that seems just beyond reach
for whatever
reason

It seems to come along at
the wrong time
or season

At a time when circumstances
just do not seem to
cooperate

A time when each of the people
are involved with someone else
or something else

When neither wants to cause
hurt or pain to
someone

~So~
they cause pain to
themselves
~~0~~





I should say that this poem doesn't concern me and Gary at all. It's written for a friend of mine.


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-27-2003 07:11 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-06-27 12:11 PM


.....Yes.....

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2 posted 2003-06-27 12:13 PM


HOW TRUE!
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3 posted 2003-06-27 12:15 PM


Susan...I know...from another time and season.  

Hugs  to you  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-06-27 12:16 PM


This is so sweet, and so utterly true. Thank you for every word of it.

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5 posted 2003-06-27 12:17 PM


timothysangel...you sound like you know....or have known....
Hugs  
Ethel

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6 posted 2003-06-27 12:18 PM


Ed,

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7 posted 2003-06-27 12:40 PM


Ethel...You have such a big heart and knowing way...this is lovely, though sadly true at times.  
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8 posted 2003-06-27 12:45 PM


a nice read - enjoyed! and I know the feeling very well! Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2003-06-27 01:14 AM


I know, Martie. I think sometimes that people jump into marriages and don't wait for the person who is meant for them. Maybe that's why there are so many divorces?
.
.
Roniece, I'm really sorry that you know this feeling....or have ever known this feeling. It's not a good one.
.
.
Hugs to you both  
Ethel

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....wow
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Yes...sad, but sometimes true, and beautifully said.
Hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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12 posted 2003-06-27 02:49 PM


Ah, lady... you always give us such beauty... and this is one of your best. *S*
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13 posted 2003-06-27 03:35 PM


I think so...James
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14 posted 2003-06-27 04:50 PM


This is the story of my life.... I have that person that I loved with all my heart.. but the time was not my friend...
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15 posted 2003-06-27 05:44 PM


so true....

well done my friend..and a message we should remember perhaps in our own life...

hugs.

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16 posted 2003-06-27 07:09 PM


Dixie,
Vicky,
suthern,
James,
papabear,
Capt. Ron,
Thank you all for your sweet replies. I appreciate ya'll very much.
Heart hugs to you all,  
Ethel

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17 posted 2003-06-28 12:34 PM


Ethel...You are a very wise woman with a wealth of understanding and a wealth of poetic talent.  Thank you for sharing your gift. ***Ivy Rose
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18 posted 2003-06-28 12:58 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ethel, this is so very true, dearest friend, it saddens me to see so many not really commit to the love in relationships and jump to marriages, the friendship should always be concrete in marriage and sadly even people can become less than strangers ever so much nowadays! (sad sigh) I just want to make a girl feel she can trust me and I just want to be her best friend forever and whatever pace she wants to walk, I want to hold her hand and walk the same pace! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your heart shines with compassion, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ethel, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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19 posted 2003-06-28 09:17 AM


This poem is too good to fade just because people put up 200 other poems in a day.

There's too much that's real here, and it's too tenderly written to just pass down the list......let's put it back on top where it belongs.

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