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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2003-06-26 11:19 PM



MOM, MOM....

Mom, Mom, please talk to me tonight
Mom, Mom, please let me know things will be alright
Mom, Mom, I cry for you still after all these years
Mom, Mom, I cry for you now and shed my tears
Mom, Mom, why did you have to go away
Mom, Mom, when all I needed was for you to stay
Mom, Mom, I miss you
Mom, Mom, I love you
Mom, Mom, do you hear me cry
Mom, Mom, I just wasn't ready to say goodbye...


Roniece Dawson-Bruce

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Gaia
1 posted 2003-06-26 11:50 PM


poignant, heartbeat felt
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2 posted 2003-06-26 11:58 PM


Oh........there aren't any words


....except, thank you for sharing yours.

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altoladybj
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3 posted 2003-06-27 12:05 PM


tugs at the heart, I wonder if we're ever ready to say goodbye, enjoyed the read and write.

Beverly

KoKo
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4 posted 2003-06-27 12:09 PM


Ow. This is painful...

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Larry C
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5 posted 2003-06-27 12:45 PM


DAD, DAD...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Martie
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6 posted 2003-06-27 01:04 AM


A mother is a painful loss.  
EagleOne
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7 posted 2003-07-01 08:58 AM


I just don't have the words my friend, take care!

And now she's in me, always with me, tiny dancer in my hand ~ Bernie Taupin

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2003-07-02 04:31 AM


beautiful words for your mom...James
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