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Echoing Voices |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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But in the core of being, impearls consummation profound As daylight knows a taste perceiving, be long and proud Musical ponds in sunlight, magnolias prose their seeking Interchanging mystical, imploding a measure of solstice evenings What greater interests man unfolds, in heavenly water feeling certain Inscribed the blind with streaking images plucking soulful words Life wears a bright array, of golden poems caprice We call upon the ancients for their fine discoveries Came this generation strong that painted perfectly Souvenirs of souls heaving speech across the atmosphere Passions of devotions leap majestic images in the breeze Boisterous rivers spice the shores which plum a source of might Chanting tenderness of life within a twilight moon Embrace a portal of many dreams conceiving lantern tunes In my thoughts the watching eyes of speech conceive That touch of hottest blooms of peace always lingering Life of promise, urgently comes to sooth and mark our way Where swans become an island song of two which never stray We cross the mat of tranquil future emerging from our past Within a sense of nothingness where man comes hom |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Last line should be Where man comes home at last...its late folks, need some sleep...Nighty night and have a wonderful day tomorrow. Lee J. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Even with the errors............its wonderful! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"In my thoughts the watching eyes of speech conceive" again, your poetry is just so rich...full for lack of better terminology...  I like this very much |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write n read of poetry,,, A voice of honesty |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Lovely Writing.... Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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