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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-06-26 10:17 PM

Richened by the cream
That wanders to top by seem
Coloring the depths in joy
Of every stirred and galloped ploy

Fibrillating in the dawn
Of every thought let rise in fawn
Ripened in the sun’s ferment
To spring before my eyes intent

Smiles from the heart of times
Blown on whims as trembles chimes
Scenic travels gasped and stared
Textures painted warm and shared

Richened in good humor coats
Flavored in pastel denotes
Whispered lingers on the breeze
Open hearted – loves slight tease

Warm eternal calm to be
Songs of rhyme eternally

Copyright Kkh 6/26/03

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-06-26 10:20 PM

Exceptional write....gotta read again, I was hollering at the kids and trying to read...besides the second time is always better!

SuperDave
Junior Member

since 2002-09-12

Posts 48
Little House on the Hill

2 posted 2003-06-26 10:34 PM

I like this, good imagery.

David

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-06-26 10:38 PM

This entire poem was so brilliantly written
each and every word, but what held my heart were

Fibrillating in the dawn
Of every thought let rise in fawn
Ripened in the sun’s ferment
To spring before my eyes intent

how perfect life gathers our dawns early light of a new day...birth of many to come
flowing words and lovely write.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-06-26 10:51 PM

Warm eternal calm to be
Songs of rhyme eternally

Oh yes, Kathleen...this is so beautiful.
Thank you, you really are a sparkly Diamond.

Hugs

Ethel

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2003-06-26 11:06 PM

mmmm, the images this brought to my minds eye are absolutely delightful

It is said the Creator has taken a handful of South Wind and given each newborn Arabian the power of flight without wings

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-06-26 11:16 PM

My heart tonight skips delight
For This Diamond's lovely write

This is so beautiful...I sort of feel like I am floating.

Wow, I don't want this feeling to end
Think I will go back and read again

Patricia

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