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martina
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0 posted 2003-06-26 07:14 PM



Where Were You When I Needed You
I had a rough night where were you? At home don't think so. At the bar posibly i can't really say i try to find you. You are no where to be found. Looking here and there still no sign. When will i see you agian will it be sooner or later? I hope you return soon. Later i find out you are my wind my heart .i never understood why you did what you did you must have had a good reason. I always ask myself why people say you have went to a beter place where your name can be called in peace. I hope you always remember i love you.BYE BYE GRANDFATHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Martina

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timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-06-26 08:39 PM


Wonderful, and very emotional!


Hockeychick19
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2 posted 2003-06-26 10:26 PM


Nice write Carrie.... very heart-felt.  Keep up the good work :-)

~Kelly~

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-06-26 10:32 PM


Nice writing...James
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