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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-26 06:29 PM



It is comforting
to know
I can look at your face
and feel no twinge.

Alarmingly so
I have underestimated
how long
resentment must have been growing.

I smile content
at memories of sky
black and blue
it seems it had more of a hold on me

than you.

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-06-26 07:21 PM


Ahh..Wow, I painted a world in my mind, great write.
Wind
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2 posted 2003-06-26 07:46 PM


liked it girl, I don't even have a hold on myself

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-06-26 08:25 PM


Ah realizations..good fer ye Gem xx
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
4 posted 2003-06-26 10:34 PM


Enjoyed that one Gem...it was great....I could see it in my mind!
ctowen
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5 posted 2003-06-27 11:04 AM


As I have said before ....

       .... your soul ....
                      Beautiful!    xx

Ceinwyn
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6 posted 2003-06-27 11:26 AM


it's good to see you smile this was refreshing gem

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
7 posted 2003-06-27 11:29 AM


-Sigh-...

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-06-27 01:51 PM


maybe one day I'll get to that point
Ericc
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9 posted 2003-06-27 05:16 PM


I loved this!
Eric

Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2003-06-27 06:11 PM


Now it might hurt, because it doesn't hurt anymore ...
But  peace after resentment is wonderful.

Very impressive write.
Love, Margherita

vandana
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11 posted 2003-06-27 07:33 PM


enjoyed
garysgirl
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12 posted 2003-06-27 08:05 PM


Alarmingly so
I have underestimated
how long
resentment must have been growing



Gemma, my little friend, I just don't know what to say, except that I am truly sorry.  

Heart hugs, my friend            
Ethel

Wind
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13 posted 2003-06-27 08:14 PM


Gemma! Where the Heck are you? We miss you... Oh, now I see how it is

oh you know I'd never be mad at you

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

littlewing
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14 posted 2003-06-28 06:18 AM


I love seeing your spirit . . .
Good girl Gem
xxoo

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