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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-26 05:46 PM


You are my sun
you are my moon
you are the stars that shine in the sky
you are my heart
and my soul
you are the thoughts in my head
you are my breath
you're the reason i live
you're the reason i wake up in the morning
so when can i tell you,
you're my everything?


...so kiss me hard cause this will be the last time i let you...

© Copyright 2003 Chelsea - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
1 posted 2003-06-26 05:51 PM


Bestill my beating heart!!

     

That was wonderful!!

Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves.
-Audre Lorde


secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
2 posted 2003-06-26 05:51 PM


Smiiiile!!!!!!!

You will can so soon...

good writer

hugsssssss

papabear
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 102
Atlanta, GA
3 posted 2003-06-26 06:36 PM


well done
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
4 posted 2003-06-27 06:49 PM


Well, you just told ...
beautifully.
Love, Margherita

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