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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-26 05:14 PM


Alchemy

coal quickly
turned into
a diamond
with the touch
of your hand

"i am out of estrogen and i have a gun"

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-26 05:39 PM


Wonderful allusion!

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2 posted 2003-06-26 05:55 PM


Isn't that what we all are????

....Just diamonds in the rough, waiting to be polished and shine to our true perfection....

Wonderful Lady!!!

Give us more, more, more!  

    

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3 posted 2003-06-26 08:33 PM


brilliant and beautiful
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4 posted 2003-06-26 08:58 PM




(smiles) Oh Helen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful words do! (kiss on cheek) Your poetry has all the elements at the palm of your hand, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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5 posted 2003-06-27 12:58 PM


very good imagery
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6 posted 2003-06-27 04:45 AM


nice one!
Patricia
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7 posted 2003-06-27 08:38 AM


This is lovely.  With a touch...

Patricia

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