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Mango Crimson |
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Shadows of Time Junior Member
since 2003-06-24
Posts 14 |
Orange and red, shades of fire A natural flicker, an attractive flame Strands of crimson mixing, dancing, fluttering in the wind Swirling colors lost in a gentle breeze Black ends, dark as night, cover the tips The swirl of incredible colors The sweet smell I love her hair |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
To think that I almost let this jewel of a write pass by! Awesome and I am putting this into my library. Chris  "Said you'd give me light... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I love the title, too! It got my attention. Exciting images... |
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BtwnRockandHardPlace Member
since 2001-10-23
Posts 98NJ, USA |
"The sweet smell I love her hair" I Love that you put this at the end. It was a bit of a surprise ending and very sweet. Thanks. *~*~*~*~ |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
very nicely written! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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