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Open Poetry #27

Hello to you too---inspired by Sea

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

0 posted 2003-06-26 09:19 AM

Why does she just sit there
eyes cast down
not even looking at me?
Can't she see the want
in my own eyes?
Hello...
What does it take
to get beyond hello?
What do I have to do
to make her look, to make her see?
Hello...
Hello...
No not again today
Look at me
See me
See what I am when I am near you
Please...
As she walks away.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2003-06-26 09:53 AM

ooooo...Paula....

I like this very much!

[This message has been edited by SEA (06-26-2003 09:53 AM).]

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-06-26 11:09 AM

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-06-26 11:23 AM

Paula,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-26 01:34 PM

ouch

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2003-06-27 06:13 AM

An excellent reply.

Melton

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-06-27 06:20 AM

Well done, Paula.
Great to see you posting again.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-06-27 06:31 AM

Good Jobber thanks for the read. Have a great day.

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