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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-06-26 08:15 AM

She’s Not

She’s not an angel more a ghost
These toasted symbols that I host
She lends her presence to my dreams
In greenery and babbling streams

Her breeze is ether in the air
That puts at ease my sleeps aware
Shrouds me with a phantoms cloak
As flimsy as a fires smoke

Her presence sugars me with sweet
A heart that’s pleasured by a treat
And whispers me sweet lullabies
That brings a tear into my eyes.

She is the epitome of roam
The magic of the power ohm
The power of the flowers core
Who could ask for anything more?

I seek her in the stars at night
And find her there just to the right.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-06-26 08:20 AM

Have I told you lately how wonderful it is waking up to your words?
Well it is...and they are!
~Smiles, Morning Hugs & Tea, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-06-26 08:27 AM

Another beautiful verse from the heart
Where love abides and words depart
Would that the dove who sings like this
Have in his heart a lifelong bliss

Everything you write is amazing
Liz

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-06-26 09:08 AM

Nancy,
Be right there for tea,

Elizabeth,
I hope my poems make you as happy as your replies to me.

Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2003-06-26 09:19 AM

Oh and do I know this person well Sy, for she is the dearest friend I have ever had

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-06-26 09:24 AM

When we love I believe we learn to understand how so precious and valuable the mundane can be, perhaps the largest miracles, which before we could not see...Beautiful words, thank you for sharing.

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

6 posted 2003-06-26 09:26 AM

How lovely

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2003-06-26 09:37 AM

She is the epitome of roam
The magic of the power ohm

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I seek her in the stars at night
And find her there just to the right.

=============================

How clever and cool is your symbolism
How lovely is your longing set in rhyme...
This is a Sy-sigh in the sky.
A beautiful write to your Eastern star of night.

*WW*

All I can feel is this distance between you and me.
I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me
because touching is believing.

c.j.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2003-06-26 09:40 AM

Ah Sy...
Your tea is sweet
and full of sighs!

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

9 posted 2003-06-26 09:41 AM

Goodmorning, sweet Sy

I love this one this morning. This is just
so sweet....especially this part.....

Her presence sugars me with sweet
A heart that’s pleasured by a treat
And whispers me sweet lullabies
That brings a tear into my eyes.

Have a good day, sweet Seymour.

Hugs to you

Ethel

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2003-06-26 09:42 AM

"Shrouds me with a phantoms cloak
As flimsy as a fires smoke"

such cool lines here...but I like this one best..your rhymes are always so tight!

BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 98
NJ, USA

11 posted 2003-06-26 09:43 AM

Symore

that was so sweet and gentle. such love. thank you for your kind words!

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~

*******************************
Love deeply and passionately.
You might get hurt but
it's the only way to live

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2003-06-26 09:48 AM

Good morning, Mr. T.!

"the magic of the power ohm" is my favorite line out of this poem--which has several memorable ones!

While I'm luxuriating in a bath--which is where I love to meditate!--I sink down into the water right up to my chin and repeatedly say ohm and the water vibrates that God energy through my whole body! Talk about feeling the power!!!

You don't just have one angel looking out for you, Dear One, you have a heavenly host of them!

Huggums snuggums,
EA
P.S. I included you and Randy in my poem (An Imaginary Passion's Party)

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

13 posted 2003-06-26 10:25 AM

This is perfectly lovely Seymour. Makes me want to go back to bed and dream a little bit more. But if I did we would miss our tea and ummm...apple spice muffins.

Thankyou for this write - hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2003-06-26 11:00 AM

Mysteria
Now what birdy told you that? LOL

Lee,
A wise comment, thank you.

Paula
Thank you.

JM,
And I have a star just for you, yes I do.

Sunshine,
Can you read sigh leaves just like tea leaves

Ethel,
You are sweet, Hugs

SEA
I run a tight ship. LOL

Benita
You welcome and thank you.

Earth Angel
Huggums snuggums and right after a wet bath.
Hugs back.

Chris,
See you at tea, hugs.

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

15 posted 2003-06-26 11:41 AM

Wonderfully Delightful!

Thanks for sharing it with us!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2003-06-26 11:54 AM

timothysangel1973
Thank you for the read and comment.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

17 posted 2003-06-26 01:31 PM

nice last lines!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2003-06-26 02:23 PM

passing,
Thank you for the read and reply.

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

19 posted 2003-06-26 03:50 PM

I like your Happy Place.

Melton

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

20 posted 2003-06-26 03:57 PM

I think I can, I think I can!!!

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-26-2003 03:58 PM).]

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

21 posted 2003-06-26 04:04 PM

And whispers me sweet lullabies
That brings a tear into my eyes.

Saying what she's not says a lot of what she IS. *S* I like this very much, Seymour. *S*

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

22 posted 2003-06-26 05:18 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your poetry "epiphanizes" such beauty and what it isn't also! (big hugggssssssss) May what matters always shine in your heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2003-06-26 06:20 PM

Melton,
Thank you for the read and like.

Sunshine
So send me a reading, LOL :kiss;

suthern
You are a love,

Noah,
Thank you for the read and comment.

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