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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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newspaper headlines start the day as coffee fumes struggle to deliver daylight to heavy eyes with shivers of yawns -- almost immediately tiredness stabs back out of sleep and out of loop as the cycle breaks again day becomes night and night becomes day it is the same confusion painted in wide landscape of long straying lanes so what did you say was waiting to happen? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sudhir - you are brilliant! the title - perfect . . . making me smile this morning through the haze . . . xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-26-2003 07:01 AM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) some mornings are just tougher than others aren't they? well done |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I can relate! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love this one! Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
very nice read! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Pardon? lol. Love this my smiling friend. hugs, Chris  "Said you'd give me light... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
so what did you say was waiting to happen? HeeHee!!! Don't you hate it when the same old routine gets so monotonous?? eh?? LOL Hugs to you  Ethel |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
I'm trying to get out of that routine! But sometimes... eh? “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (06-26-2003 01:07 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 nice write! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Say what?  Excellent write Sudhir! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much for coming by and reading and commenting on this one regards sudhir |
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