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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-06-26 06:06 AM



Fleeting memory bliss
is not enough
to keep me warm to you
hardening skin
the scar builds
it will never bleed
for you again.

© Copyright 2003 gj - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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1 posted 2003-06-26 06:09 AM


Amen Gem . . .
hard scar to heal
but seems as if
it is starting

Good for you missy
Your too bright of a star
to not shine
and here
you do
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-06-26 06:48 AM


Love will come to where you are, just show your heart, be you, and you will be loved for all the right reasons! and your scar will no longer be there! hugs!

A Romantic Heart

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-26-2003 06:49 AM).]

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-06-26 07:48 AM


Very powerful and filled with a beautiful, underlying strength.
Great poem!
Eric

Cpat Hair
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4 posted 2003-06-26 07:52 AM


ouch...but in sime wys the healing is a blocking out of the things that we allowed to hurt us in the beginning..

enjoyed.

ctowen
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5 posted 2003-06-26 08:54 AM


Clotting occurs when both happiness and pain meets time,

    their consistency depends on the value of each.

           Some scars never seem to fade away,
              but you are on the path of recovery!

                                   
                          

Wind
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6 posted 2003-06-26 12:43 PM


Sorry I missed this one, I'm bumping it for you.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (06-26-2003 10:36 PM).]

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-06-26 01:16 PM


sigh of understanding
Bill Charles
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8 posted 2003-06-26 02:13 PM


gemjop - my best sent to you...

BC

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-06-26 03:00 PM



Aenimal
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10 posted 2003-06-26 08:45 PM


I bow in reverance to this write..the ultimate and all powerful FU..
Mistletoe Angel
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11 posted 2003-06-26 09:08 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) Oh Gemma, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, this bleeds with emotion and I send angel hugs your way as the scar may still be there but you will find the love you desire ever so much! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

timothysangel1973
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12 posted 2003-06-26 10:26 PM


Wonderful!!
Your strength is in your pen obviously!

Keep the healing process moving!

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