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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665


0 posted 2003-06-26 05:49 AM


Silent is the night, my heart longs for you, i want you but i want you to be free, i do not own you.

What soulmates we have become, joy is in my heart,passion and love so true.

Please stay in my world forever, never leave me alone, your mind is so good, witty, inteligent and clever.

Talking to you thrills me, if i knew no one in this whole world but you, i would not be alone ever.

Diamonds, emeralds and saphires do not sparkle as brightly as you do, your love i am a slave to.

Reach out to me, fill me with delight, tell me your intimate words, things you want me to do.

Across arrid deserts, jungles and vast sheets of ice, i would walk to meet you, we swim together under the ocean deep and blue.

Mermaid of sweet desire, brush your long dark hair and sing your sweet song for me, all i need is you,you,you....

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-06-26 05:59 AM


Phil;

absolutely beautiful . . .
and a knight indeed:

i want you but i want you to be free, i do not own you.

lucky she is - the both of you
*smiling*
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-06-26 07:20 AM


I am here my love, and I will sing only for

your ears to hear, my mermaid song of love,

These loving arms are always open wide, come here  thy song and reamain forever by thy side....

Your Mermaid XXXOOO

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-06-26 07:43 AM


Simply adorning and precious...how love can enduce a soul to speak loudly with smiles and warmth...I've watched two friends of mine, who met later in life...they were both married before and they now work together, play together, oh how they love life together, they are always kidding each other and laughing and how much in love they are. They were both very mature and responsible and ready for love.  It is a joy to be around them...and they are who your poem reminded me of.  Thank you for the early morning smiles...and good loving thoughts...keep writing and loving you two, whoever you are, cause there is nothing else in life of greater value.  
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-06-26 01:45 PM


gorgeous!
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