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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665


0 posted 2003-06-26 05:36 AM


Let me hear your heart through night and day.

Let me touch your cheek, listen to every soothing word you say.

Let me smooth my hands down your back, onto your firm buttocks so soft and fair.

Let me kiss your stomach,probe my tongue into your navel, feel your silky hair.

Let me fasten your golden anklet,kiss your sweet feet with small kisses, planting them with little hearts of gold.

Let me kiss your delicious scented neck,hold you tightly in my arms, you i will unfold.

Let us stare at the stars,the cosmos, the universe.
For eternity shall i always love you and your vast deep heart...!

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-06-26 06:01 AM


Phil . . .
I cant wait for her to see this
My God - is just beautiful
just beautiful
xxoo

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-06-26 07:24 AM


Let me fasten your golden anklet,kiss your sweet feet with small kisses, planting them with little hearts of gold.(my favorite line)

Let you love me till we grow old,

Let you write poetry for me and share

our stories of old...Forever and always I will...

Your Love oooxoxox

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-06-26 07:37 AM


I cannot tell you how beauiful this poem was...how I've prayed to hear someone very special say these very words and mean them.  I hope that whoever you've written these words for...well, simply this, tell them, and prove it to them...stay with them and never leave...if you love them that much...there is nothing else in life worth anything without them. Nothing...b/c you've found the other half of your soul...and you know something...I belive that is our purpose...to find that person and realize the value of them, life, and the delicate circle of love, patience, understanding.  Oh, it's so easy to say I love you...but to live by those words, is a whole other story.  If two people have found that in each other, there is nothing else that matters.  Thank you for this valuable read, touching and hopeful.  Love to you and this person, and may God light a light within your souls forever.  
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-06-26 01:47 PM


wondering how you do it
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