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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Dying Dreams Tanka 5-7-5-7-7 Though inside I die the sky still sings in sapphire yet, how do dreams breathe when love has no guarantee and life, no inspiration By Melissa P. Long-Monette |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Because you BELIEVE, and if you wonder such things, you are BELIEVING and certainly when you BELIEVE all of this must mean something and you just have to think it through a different way! (sigh) This is very heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! just brilliant! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Excellent job Melissa is tough for me to say so much in so few words you have done beautifully Inspiration . . . look within . . . it is there xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Honeybee - you write of sadness, yet with a beautiful smile... BC |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Shrugs shoulders..don't ask me i just work here Nice write for someone who claims she ouldn't lately |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Melissa.. Much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
I don't know melissa, but i do know this makes only too much sense. how life mocks us. loved this.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Melissa...wow..you've packed so much emotion into such a few, well-chosen words. This touched me, my friend. Hugs,  ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
And our dreams know no limitations... They can take us anywhere... Nicely written, Honeybee...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"The sky still sings in sapphire"--keep that lovely thought, Melissa!  Warm healing hugs, Linda |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Honeybee - sadness of a heart I read from such a lovely woman... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Feeling this. Sandra |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
it reveals sadness and longing for lost love |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Mel..so good..cant think of anything to say. i should use my library smille but I can't find it |
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