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icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows

0 posted 2003-06-25 10:55 PM



Witch!
Thy hatred follows me;
who gave thee life?
Thou fiery bitch!
I did not cast thee out;
it is thine Tarquin fates
that anger thee.
Priestess whore!
Thou comes to me still
burning in the restless night.
Harlot sorceress!
thou wakes my mind with fear
to offer safety's impotence
tempered in a promised wisp of fame.
Magic bawd!
Thee wouldst have me yet believe
thou art my strength.
Wormwood slut!
A hundred thousand years
of ice and fire changed thee not.
Darkness Queen!
Thy time hast come and gone
whilst mine hath not.

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2003-06-25 10:57 PM


now is that any way to talk to me?...lol...h
quatro
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2 posted 2003-06-25 11:22 PM


Oooohhh.....I like this

The read was very easy to follow and I felt the writer's words.  Great Job!

quatro

Martie
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3 posted 2003-06-26 12:24 PM


icebox...hmmmm, perhaps if you were to use sweeter words, she would do what you would have her do. Especially if she is a she.  But, I do understand how sometimes it feels like the muse is in control...(PS and maybe they are)
timothysangel1973
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4 posted 2003-06-26 12:25 PM


Well.......someone musta got you fired up this fine evening Ice!  HaHa

Intuitive write I so say!

Tima

Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves.
-Audre Lorde


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-06-26 01:53 AM


very cool
Nan
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6 posted 2003-06-26 08:27 AM


Methinks thy harlot usurps thee - for she knoweth of your scrivening flair...
Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2003-06-26 08:34 AM


I think I know her... you sure she isn't moonlighting on you...she sure sounds familiar..


Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2003-06-26 10:27 AM


Hell, I know her in human form!!!

Excellent Sir Ice!

Susan

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