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Goodknight
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0 posted 2003-06-25 08:54 PM


So lacey were the thoughts
Were there ways they could be bought
Did you weave them just that way
Who tended them
Now woven to a sigh
A heart saw and cried
A love held close
An eye watched and shed
Tears for all
Had something we loved died????


© Copyright 2003 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-25 08:56 PM


"So lacey were the thoughts
Were there ways they could be bought
Did you weave them just that way
Who tended them
Now woven to a sigh"

Beautiful words..

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2 posted 2003-06-25 09:40 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Paul, this is heartfelt, sweet friend, I hate the thought of something dying and I hope this doesn't relate to you as it has to me before, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2003-06-25 10:01 PM


very nice write!

Tima

Martie
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4 posted 2003-06-25 10:42 PM


Paul

Sometimes it's obvious, and sometimes it just is.  

JilGirl
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5 posted 2003-06-25 10:48 PM


A much enjoyed write!
Thanks!

Blessings!
Shirl

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Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

ecrivan
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6 posted 2003-06-25 10:52 PM


brings the old lace hankerchief back to life..enjoyed


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7 posted 2003-06-26 12:08 PM


Very lovely write Paul..much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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   you haven't been listening.~

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8 posted 2003-06-26 01:59 AM


ah, enjoyed the read
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9 posted 2009-03-28 10:49 PM


Heartfelt indeed!


ARCTIC WIND

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