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Goodknight
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So lacey were the thoughts
Were there ways they could be bought
Did you weave them just that way
Who tended them
Now woven to a sigh
A heart saw and cried
A love held close
An eye watched and shed
Tears for all
Had something we loved died????

© Copyright 2003 Paul Tofte - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-25-2003 08:56 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"So lacey were the thoughts
Were there ways they could be bought
Did you weave them just that way
Who tended them
Now woven to a sigh"

Beautiful words..
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(big hugggssssssss) Oh Paul, this is heartfelt, sweet friend, I hate the thought of something dying and I hope this doesn't relate to you as it has to me before, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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very nice write!

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Paul

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A much enjoyed write!
Thanks!

Blessings!
Shirl

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Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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brings the old lace hankerchief back to life..enjoyed

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Very lovely write Paul..much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

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   you haven't been listening.~

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ah, enjoyed the read
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Heartfelt indeed!


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