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Way Out

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LastMoments
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0 posted 06-25-2003 08:04 PM       View Profile for LastMoments   Email LastMoments   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LastMoments


Just when the past
Had made itself a scar
It resurfaced showing me
Exactly who you are
I whiped your tears away
To be swept underneathe
By their current of emotion
That lay beneathe your feet
What held this in
Why couldn't you tell me

You've been all I see
Lately taking part of me
Lost inside the chain links
Of my sheltered mind
Every pathway locked
From all the insecurity
That you burrowed deep inside
The lonely parts of me

Make the insides weep
Show me to the gates
That line themselves in reflection
As hopes disintegrate
Take my hand in yours
And walk me to the end
Cause we wont talk from here
As my mind still mends

Mending from your loss
Entrapped inside your guilt
I will find a way
I will find my way out
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1 posted 06-25-2003 08:40 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

"you burrowed deep inside
The lonely parts of me"

Reminds me of the kind of poems I used to write.. Enjoyed.
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2 posted 06-25-2003 10:06 PM       View Profile for timothysangel1973   Email timothysangel1973   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit timothysangel1973's Home Page   View IP for timothysangel1973

"Mending from your loss
Entrapped inside your guilt
I will find a way
I will find my way out"

Geez, it's like you're in my head!!

Wonderful!

Tima
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3 posted 06-26-2003 02:37 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

very powerful write
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4 posted 03-30-2009 07:52 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Powerful write Indeed!


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