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yv
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0 posted 2003-06-25 07:15 PM


He walks in essence
Like the fragile patter of a butterfly wing

All of the love of my heart
And the lust of my desire for him
He permiates through his presence

He sends chills
Such chills as to only satisfy
The heat that burns within me

Because of this feeling
He enraptures me

His very shadow
Involves me in life
The life within his
His life intertwined within mine

I see his aura
The colors of
Pink beauty
Red desire
Orange fire
Blue sorrow
Sorrow from the eloquent madness of life

Yet the happiness that I feel
Whenever I feel he is near me
It is enough to make my depression
Receed

He knows me

With his walk
His stare
His candor

All he is is beauty
All I feel is life
All he exudes is rapture
All I feel is delight

His beautiful mystique
It entrances me
He alone wavers the strength in my voice
But his essence dares me not to speak

It is this mystery of life that
Brings tears to my eyes
Bright delight and
Whets my sensual appetite

And with life comes the end
And the end I feel is near
But with him all pain of torturous waiting
Has been completely eradicated
Leaving me now more than ever enthralled in his

Beautiful mystique

yv

[This message has been edited by yv (06-25-2003 07:24 PM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-06-25 07:36 PM


Nice writing...James
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2 posted 2003-06-26 10:07 AM


He knows me

Such a simple phrase... but it means everything... when someone knows... and loves what they know. *S*

This is beautiful, yv... I really like. *S*

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Georgia
3 posted 2003-06-26 11:09 AM



passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-06-26 01:36 PM


very nice
Ceinwyn
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5 posted 2003-06-26 08:58 PM


*sighs*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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6 posted 2003-06-26 10:33 PM


much enjoyed!
Patricia
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7 posted 2003-06-26 11:27 PM


Oh, so beautiful.  I feel a bit dreamy.

Very soft and lovely verse.

Patricia

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8 posted 2003-06-26 11:45 PM


Happy is the one.....

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