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Temptress
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0 posted 06-25-2003 07:10 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Temptress

heart
raw
unjust fears roam
with their heavy feet
commanding thunder
in walls of skin
climbing slippery branches of bone
crushing me from inside out.
My love cannot breathe
if anger clouds
thicken the room.

You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL

© Copyright 2003 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow


1 posted 06-25-2003 08:55 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Great write, the imagery rocks.
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough


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How often I feel this way!!   Wonderful piece of work!     Tima
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Yes, this is stellar.  the imagery does in
fact rock.  and the entire piece came together
nicely...

BTW...thanx for the bump!
passing shadows
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very true
Dark Angel
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True that!

Enjoyed.

Maree
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standing on a shadow's lace


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missing ...you...h
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True true true!


ARCTIC WIND
 
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