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SarBear
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0 posted 06-25-2003 06:09 PM       View Profile for SarBear   Email SarBear   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SarBear

Alone
The sun may be shining but I'm still cold
The lights may be on
but I'm left in the dark
Cant seem to understand why nothing means what it should
Needles are raining down on me
I cant seem to get out of my mind
I'm scratching at the walls of time
I want an escape
an everlasting vacation
All the hands that were once held out
have become invisible
I just need someone to be there for me
I need someone to care
I thought I had all the friends in the world
but now as I open my eyes, for the first time, it seems,
That theres no one here
Im all alone
© Copyright 2003 Sara Connolly - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-25-2003 08:51 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Great write, I really felt this one..
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2 posted 06-25-2003 09:05 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I don't know if you want words of comfort, but sometimes things are left best as they are. Honey, we're all alone inside. I find it comforting, but it scares others. Good write.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
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3 posted 06-25-2003 09:31 PM       View Profile for Ceinwyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ceinwyn

I hear ya..

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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You ain't alone...you got us!!!!!

Great one!

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JamesMichael
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Yes, I have felt alone many times, and sometimes it feels very sad and sometimes I like it...at times I have endured being alone because I knew that a relationship I was in must come to an end...James
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Very sad but heartfelt words, friends you will have and you already have here at pip/

Thank you for sharing your words.

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8 posted 04-04-2009 09:58 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Sad Write!


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