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exhale
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since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2003-06-25 05:52 PM


my heart was ripped open
and thrown on the floor
for all to see
for all to admire
whats there to admire
the heart of a poet?
or the heart of a lunitic?
i bleed words
all for your amusement
all for your entertainment
thats all i am
something to gawk and point at
nothing to get truly close to
nothing to truly love
just nothing
i bleed words...



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papabear
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 102
Atlanta, GA
1 posted 2003-06-25 05:54 PM


Well done!!!
Wind
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2 posted 2003-06-25 06:34 PM


I bleed blood. haha, don't listen to me, I've gone crazy. Nice one, and it's true.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-06-25 07:58 PM


EXACTLY . . .
best way to bleed
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2003-06-26 02:52 AM


yeah...sigh
timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
5 posted 2003-06-26 12:20 PM


We are a misunderstood group aren't we?

Oh well, keep bleeding those words, cause they are WONDERFUL to read!


Wind
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6 posted 2003-06-26 12:32 PM


But don't bleed too many words or you'll become poeticly annemic and won't have enough words left

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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