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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-06-25 05:19 PM



Not this.

No...we are less than
this.

And yet...somehow we
are always more.

We are the question that remains
after every answer.

We are the layers underneath the
bareness of each other.

We are the lie to every truth
and the reality in all
that is fake.

We are this.

yet we're not.

And somehow ...it all
makes perfect
sense.



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Magnus
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1 posted 2003-06-25 05:34 PM


I don't have a clue why this poem was sitting
with a big 0 on it.  I like the read and
feel of this piece.  Nicely done.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-06-25 05:48 PM


Beautiful thoughts Eric as always!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-06-26 04:19 AM


oh i do love your words yanno..back to the top...xxxxx
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-06-26 06:10 AM


Ericc:

yes yes and yes

We are the lie to every truth
and the reality in all
that is fake.

Awesome lines truly
xxoo

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with you
5 posted 2003-06-26 09:09 AM


"We are the question that remains
after every answer.

We are the layers underneath the
bareness of each other."

oh, I do like this, very much

Paula Finn
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missouri
6 posted 2003-06-26 09:10 AM


This is simply wonderful
timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-06-26 12:09 PM


"We are the lie to every truth
and the reality in all
that is fake."

*Stroke of genious in your pen*

Wonderful write

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-06-26 01:06 PM


awesome write Eric!
cinnamongirl
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9 posted 2003-06-26 06:46 PM


All of what seems to be nonsense, is... for a Divine reason.  It is for us to learn and explore and find the Truth and Light in the clouds and confusion.

And what a beautiful journey this is.

Beautiful, magic, profound words, dear poet... you are a gift with a gift.

Thank you for sharing.
I love you.
Moca

Margherita
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10 posted 2003-06-27 06:43 PM


To be ALL makes perfect sense.
You navigate in realms of divine enlightenment.
Love, Margherita

Patricia
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11 posted 2003-06-27 09:44 PM


We are the question that remains
after every answer.

Oh, gosh do I know this.  Excellent write, Ericc.  

Patricia


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