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Summer Shivers

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Decaflame
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0 posted 06-25-2003 03:20 PM       View Profile for Decaflame   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Decaflame


Summer Shivers

Small slivers of
life thoughts,
wondering,

who is hungrier,
more wanting,
of life giving juices
and slowly rubbed
emotions…

believing, I am,
that it is me,
drought laden,
a desert in search
of an oasis...

coming upon you
in lazy gazed loco
motion promises
mired deep in
tie-dyed gray thoughts
and lashed looks

would you reach,
then,
toward me,
gripping promises
still to be given,
grappling,
rappelling,
as husk of voice
shells you
in promise of
flavors buttering
your summer haze?

Come, feast with me,
our snow cones are
melting.


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Wind
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1 posted 06-25-2003 03:22 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Sort of mysterious....

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Enchantress
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2 posted 06-25-2003 03:24 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Deca Girl!!  So good to see you here!
"coming upon you
in lazy gazed loco
motion promises
mired deep in
tie-dyed gray thoughts
and lashed looks

would you reach,
then,
toward me,
gripping promises
still to be given,
grappling,
rappelling,
as husk of voice
shells you
in promise of
flavors buttering
your summer haze?"



Oooh yes...you sizzle in the summer girl.
..and no one wants to see their snow cones melt, huh?

Love this...
More please...and, soon?
~Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Magnus
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3 posted 06-25-2003 05:23 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Deca,  you just melted my snowcone...thanx!

Excellent write...loved it..
Janet Marie
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4 posted 06-25-2003 08:52 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

believing, I am,
that it is me,
drought laden,
a desert in search
of an oasis...

coming upon you
in lazy gazed loco
motion promises
mired deep in
tie-dyed gray thoughts
and lashed looks

would you reach,
then,
toward me,
gripping promises
still to be given,
grappling,
rappelling,
as husk of voice
shells you
in promise of
flavors buttering
your summer haze?
==========================

good grief and humidity  LOL
puddles...you are turning this place into puddles... steamy stuff Deca-girl...
but then you are the flame

All I can feel is this distance between you and me.
I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me
because touching is believing.

c.j.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural


5 posted 03-24-2009 06:14 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Good Write ~ I agree with everyone else!


ARCTIC WIND
 
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