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Out of my mind: back in five minutes

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Wind
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0 posted 06-25-2003 01:21 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Wind


Fine, go write it on the wall,
Iíve gone out of my mind,
Left my troubles behind,
Though there arenít many I recall.

But what did you expect me to do?
Bang my head on the wall
Till it turned black and blue?
And you wanted me to confess?
To what, I ask,
Do you think Iím depressed?

And I keep going back,
To where the bridge meets the road,
Where my mind jumps of the beaten track,
When I shouldíve just dumped the whole load

But what did you expect me to do?
Bang my head on the wall
Till it turned black and blue?
And you wanted me to confess?
To what, I ask,
Do you think Iím depressed?

And itís much colder here,
Than it was, 10 minutes ago,
Now Iím afraid to go near Myself,
For what reason, I don't know

But what did you expect me to do,
Bang my head on the wall,
Till it turned black and blue?

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for

© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 06-25-2003 01:27 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


And, she's back!  You've been missed,
little one...
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2 posted 06-25-2003 01:30 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Yay! It's sunshine... I've been here, I....I'm just a little mysterious....you just don't KNOW I'm here

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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3 posted 06-25-2003 01:31 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Nice to see you posting wind. Great writing


< K's fav icon grin
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4 posted 06-25-2003 01:32 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

The Wind has finally blown back in!

--"Now I'm afraid to go near Myself"--You too? I've had moments like that, and they ain't pretty! It seems I have them once a month!

Luvs 'n Hugs,
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5 posted 06-25-2003 01:34 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Wind!  Where have you been???
Your wonderful writing has been missed...
May we ask for more please?
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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6 posted 06-25-2003 01:34 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

LOL, hey you, if you DO that, I'll have to come over there and kick your you-know-what
LOL, good to see you blow into the front door
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7 posted 06-25-2003 01:38 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

hahaha that's my favorite

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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8 posted 06-25-2003 02:09 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Hey wind that looks Exactly like me!
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9 posted 06-25-2003 02:16 PM       View Profile for Nightshade   Email Nightshade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nightshade's Home Page   View IP for Nightshade

Ahh Wind....there you are. I have been looking for your writings. This one is a keeper...lol...I have been out of my mind for more than five minutes....but that's another story. Great post!! hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

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10 posted 06-25-2003 02:19 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Aenimal: what? ohh... And I read what you said about me, you are just the sweetest guy ever.

Oh, and I got that title off a teeshirt some boy was wearing, but it's exactly how I feel.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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11 posted 06-25-2003 02:30 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

What I said? Oh a coldplay fan too..see great taste in insanity
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12 posted 06-25-2003 02:34 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Chris Martin is a genius. Sorry i spelled your name wrong.
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13 posted 06-25-2003 02:49 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

No problem..still don't know what i said? lol yes coldplay are brilliant still upset i couldnt get tickets..ah well next time
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14 posted 06-25-2003 03:17 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Thread: PLAESE READ

you said that there are people here who aren't getting enough credit, and you said I was one of them. you also mentioned Gemjop and Inkedgoddess and a lot of other people, but you didn't mention yourself. And Thats something i haven't seen yet. Honey, you deserve twice the credit you get. You reply, and i haven't paid enough attention to that. Thats what you said.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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15 posted 06-25-2003 03:32 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I liked this from the title through the last line. *S*
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16 posted 06-25-2003 03:34 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Aye yer a sweetheart liz and nyet methinks I'm getting waaaaay to much credit lately but thanks..keep those poems a comin!
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17 posted 06-25-2003 04:07 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice writing...James
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me lady....we have been waiting you know? you're like royalty. we love you, and want you to post more!!!!!!!!!

great to see your name here where it belongs, you never fail to wow me with your words Liz.

ah yes, the coldplay signature. how cool r the present lines you're using. i like that one best. so true. yoouuuuu arrrrrree!

love ya windy one....dont go all quiet on us again...
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19 posted 06-25-2003 06:35 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

p.s loved the title, very clever, made me laugh. i wish oh i wish i could leave my mind for five minutes.
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20 posted 06-25-2003 06:39 PM       View Profile for exhale   Email exhale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for exhale

mmm yummy good poem...yes...i see you like coldplay? mmmmmmmmm mmmmmm good music, chris martin puts so much of himself in his work and you can feel it, much like you do
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I'l settle with that Gemma, thanks. I like being treated like a human best.

Oh, and  I always come back

blame it all on a Rush of Blood to the head.

I am going crazy

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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22 posted 06-25-2003 06:40 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

Exhale: that's like the best thing you could ever tell me.
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23 posted 06-25-2003 06:52 PM       View Profile for exhale   Email exhale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for exhale

lol! well its true, he just expresses himself sooo well and you remind me of him only you know a girl lol
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24 posted 06-25-2003 06:59 PM       View Profile for Wind   Email Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Wind

I don't think I've ever been anywhere were so many peple listen to coldplay. I thought I was the only one. My friends think I'm crazy. Shallow capitalistic Americans....

Exhale, we've been having new member problems, but you don't seem like them. I hope you stay. I don't tell many people that, i said it to Gemma and few others. You're a great poet to.


I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (06-25-2003 07:01 PM).]

 
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