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Wind
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0 posted 2003-06-25 01:21 PM



Fine, go write it on the wall,
I’ve gone out of my mind,
Left my troubles behind,
Though there aren’t many I recall.

But what did you expect me to do?
Bang my head on the wall
Till it turned black and blue?
And you wanted me to confess?
To what, I ask,
Do you think I’m depressed?

And I keep going back,
To where the bridge meets the road,
Where my mind jumps of the beaten track,
When I should’ve just dumped the whole load

But what did you expect me to do?
Bang my head on the wall
Till it turned black and blue?
And you wanted me to confess?
To what, I ask,
Do you think I’m depressed?

And it’s much colder here,
Than it was, 10 minutes ago,
Now I’m afraid to go near Myself,
For what reason, I don't know

But what did you expect me to do,
Bang my head on the wall,
Till it turned black and blue?

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for

© Copyright 2003 Liz - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-06-25 01:27 PM



And, she's back!  You've been missed,
little one...

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2 posted 2003-06-25 01:30 PM


Yay! It's sunshine... I've been here, I....I'm just a little mysterious....you just don't KNOW I'm here

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-06-25 01:31 PM


Nice to see you posting wind. Great writing


< K's fav icon grin

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-06-25 01:32 PM


The Wind has finally blown back in!

--"Now I'm afraid to go near Myself"--You too? I've had moments like that, and they ain't pretty! It seems I have them once a month!

Luvs 'n Hugs,
Earth Angel

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5 posted 2003-06-25 01:34 PM


Wind!  Where have you been???
Your wonderful writing has been missed...
May we ask for more please?
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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6 posted 2003-06-25 01:34 PM


LOL, hey you, if you DO that, I'll have to come over there and kick your you-know-what
LOL, good to see you blow into the front door

Wind
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7 posted 2003-06-25 01:38 PM


hahaha that's my favorite

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-06-25 02:09 PM


Hey wind that looks Exactly like me!
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9 posted 2003-06-25 02:16 PM


Ahh Wind....there you are. I have been looking for your writings. This one is a keeper...lol...I have been out of my mind for more than five minutes....but that's another story. Great post!! hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Wind
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10 posted 2003-06-25 02:19 PM


Aenimal: what? ohh... And I read what you said about me, you are just the sweetest guy ever.

Oh, and I got that title off a teeshirt some boy was wearing, but it's exactly how I feel.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Aenimal
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11 posted 2003-06-25 02:30 PM


What I said? Oh a coldplay fan too..see great taste in insanity
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12 posted 2003-06-25 02:34 PM


Chris Martin is a genius. Sorry i spelled your name wrong.
Aenimal
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13 posted 2003-06-25 02:49 PM


No problem..still don't know what i said? lol yes coldplay are brilliant still upset i couldnt get tickets..ah well next time

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14 posted 2003-06-25 03:17 PM


Thread: PLAESE READ

you said that there are people here who aren't getting enough credit, and you said I was one of them. you also mentioned Gemjop and Inkedgoddess and a lot of other people, but you didn't mention yourself. And Thats something i haven't seen yet. Honey, you deserve twice the credit you get. You reply, and i haven't paid enough attention to that. Thats what you said.

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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15 posted 2003-06-25 03:32 PM


I liked this from the title through the last line. *S*
Aenimal
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16 posted 2003-06-25 03:34 PM


Aye yer a sweetheart liz and nyet methinks I'm getting waaaaay to much credit lately but thanks..keep those poems a comin!
JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-06-25 04:07 PM


Nice writing...James
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18 posted 2003-06-25 06:32 PM


me lady....we have been waiting you know? you're like royalty. we love you, and want you to post more!!!!!!!!!

great to see your name here where it belongs, you never fail to wow me with your words Liz.

ah yes, the coldplay signature. how cool r the present lines you're using. i like that one best. so true. yoouuuuu arrrrrree!

love ya windy one....dont go all quiet on us again...

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19 posted 2003-06-25 06:35 PM


p.s loved the title, very clever, made me laugh. i wish oh i wish i could leave my mind for five minutes.
exhale
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20 posted 2003-06-25 06:39 PM


mmm yummy good poem...yes...i see you like coldplay? mmmmmmmmm mmmmmm good music, chris martin puts so much of himself in his work and you can feel it, much like you do

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21 posted 2003-06-25 06:39 PM


I'l settle with that Gemma, thanks. I like being treated like a human best.

Oh, and  I always come back

blame it all on a Rush of Blood to the head.

I am going crazy

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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22 posted 2003-06-25 06:40 PM


Exhale: that's like the best thing you could ever tell me.
exhale
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23 posted 2003-06-25 06:52 PM


lol! well its true, he just expresses himself sooo well and you remind me of him only you know a girl lol

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24 posted 2003-06-25 06:59 PM


I don't think I've ever been anywhere were so many peple listen to coldplay. I thought I was the only one. My friends think I'm crazy. Shallow capitalistic Americans....

Exhale, we've been having new member problems, but you don't seem like them. I hope you stay. I don't tell many people that, i said it to Gemma and few others. You're a great poet to.


I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (06-25-2003 07:01 PM).]

exhale
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25 posted 2003-06-25 07:11 PM


well thank you kindly, its good to know i'm not part of the problem lol!....hmmm....although theres a part of me who wants to rebel!!! ahem dont mind me i'm just a little whoa hoo in the head...yes....
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26 posted 2003-06-25 07:12 PM


Hey, Liz...
It's all been said, but I'll say it again anyway.....
WE  MISSED  YOU  IN  HERE  POSTING,  MISS  WIND!!

Do you want us to round up a PIP possee and go looking for you next time you disappear like that? Well, we just might do it, ya know??  LOL

Oh, I'm keeping this poem in case you do disappear again.
    
Heart hugs to you, little Lady    
Ethel

(Hey, Kit made me and Gary a little icon. This is it and it's called ethelgary. LOL
    

Pssst!!! remember when I didn't know how to put the smilies on here? Well, I learned very well, didn't I???  LOL  HaHa!!

exhale
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27 posted 2003-06-25 07:17 PM


well i'm glad that i'm not part of that group..oh those dirty evil little newbies..wait a secound....ahem yes anyways, thank you
exhale
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28 posted 2003-06-25 07:18 PM


oh goodnes ignore me i was being stupid and i didnt look on the next page..*sobs* goodness i'm very sad lol
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29 posted 2003-06-25 07:25 PM


The Gary smille is adorible. Honey, I missed you to. But you can't stop the wind from blowing.

Exhale: ehhh...what? never mind. wow, I should leave more often. look at all my responses. Oh wait. Half of them are mine LOL

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

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30 posted 2009-03-24 05:28 PM


Woooshhh! ~ What a wonderful write


ARCTIC WIND

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