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Resounding Universe

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


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Resounding Universe

I have whispered
and talked
to a brick wall
and all that
came back was
an echo of
my voice
in call
there is
a mile
in an inch
of distance
and what
matters is
what is in
the space of
that existence


© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 07-23-2000
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of Depression


1 posted 06-25-2003 08:19 AM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

I like this poem of yours,
Makes me think;

To me life is always measured
By the echo of silence through the shadow

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (06-25-2003 08:19 AM).]

Patricia
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since 04-06-2003
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Missouri


2 posted 06-25-2003 08:31 AM       View Profile for Patricia   Email Patricia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Patricia

Oh goodness.  This is so good.  I have talked to a brick wall this week, heard the echo.  Then I talked to my true love this week and found so much I didn't know.

I hope that makes sense.

This verse has so much meaning for me!

Patricia  
passing shadows
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displaced


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enlightenment is a fine thing
GhostWriter_6
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since 09-03-2001
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??Amityville??


4 posted 06-25-2003 03:47 PM       View Profile for GhostWriter_6   Email GhostWriter_6   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit GhostWriter_6's Home Page   View IP for GhostWriter_6

i always had a thing for your style.. very nyce piece....
Krawdad
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5 posted 06-25-2003 05:34 PM       View Profile for Krawdad   Email Krawdad   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Krawdad

Resoundingly outstanding !

I like this a bunch.

Kraw'
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Realm of Supernatural


6 posted 03-24-2009 05:16 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

I like this ~ I love how you talked about talking to a brick wall and nothing but echoes was returned. ~ deliciously poetic


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